http://www.myspace.com/blanktapesemptybottles new demo I played drums too, it's sloppy but lovable I hope

I left it sloppy cause it'll be an attention avoid song eventually

I think for the sake of the song I'm gonna take out the shitty drums and add keyboard or something

this is miles above any thing else you have done. let me put it this way: i didn't want to superglue penises in my ears the minute the first audible sound appeared.

the song is catchy, and i wasn't too mad about listening to it.

BUT

the cymbals are loud as fuck, and sound like shit. is that you singing? stick to faster singing, and shy away from any slow, droning, acoustic horseshittery.

once again, you have been judged.

yeah that's my solo stuff so it's all me, I'm gonna take out the drums and add a keyboard I think, thanks for the compliment, it's my favorite song I've put to music so far, word.

i liked the drums in there, kept the pace up - as opposed to what i think it would sound like without them. maybe less cymbal hits, and maybe more closed high hat. i don't know.

really? they're sloppy as fuck no? that's the last instrument I learned to play

eh I leave them for history's sake, when the song get's done with my band it's gonna rip

do what i did: buy an electronic drum set without ever knowing how to play the drums. it's awesome.

you think I should add some piano parts for the fuck of it? I bought a set over a thousand just cause it was don't pay for a year haha

lol.

fuck the piano. turn this shit into a snappy little pop punk joint.

I like how Sawtooth is the only one who bothered.

That said, I guess I bothered too, and concur with the 'Tooth's analysis.

I didn't bother because my ears are easily offended.

word that's what it is at heart, just that version is played on acoustic with shitty drums and sounds overly produced due to garage band

now new and improved with shitty piano parts!